Author: rust phoenix PM
reviews returned. a writing exercise that turned into something more personal. i like this one, even if it makes me a bit uncomfortable. written about my ex about two days before she was my ex. only 34 words without the author's note.Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 07-07-10 - Status: Complete - id: 2825896
|A+ A- Full 3/4 1/2 Expand Tighten|
to end up
just or comfortable.
between hope and focus.
to fly or
(background info: this poem is the result of trying out a writing exercise where you look at the first couple words in each line of a text. in this case it was part of a story i was working on. supposedly, doing this reveals hidden truths in the text. I am not sure if this is generally true, but in this instance it worked so well it creeped me out a bit.)