
I read a poem, and I reacted to the poem by writing one myself in reply to it. That poem was Bloodstained Paradise by Lyra Kaji, and it was tragic and beautiful enough to inspire me. Review this and I'll return the favor.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Words: 77 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 07-28-10 - Status: Complete - id: 2833077
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I read this once,
didn't know what to say.
I read it again,
more understanding.
Third time through,
I wondered.
Is it really all that hopeless,
are we that helpless?
If everyone laid down,
the tools of destruction,
their hatred,
would the world be happy?
Would Shangri-la exist,
as more than the desire,
of the soldier?
A vain daydream at best,
as the killing tool fires,
the killing tool in his hands,
and death flourishes.
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