
A lone woman stands in the moonlight in a desolate location, unknowing yet that her supernatural lover will not be returning to claim her for his own. I wrote this a year ago and only now am I showing it. Constructive criticism wanted.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Romance/Supernatural - Words: 246 - Published: 07-30-10 - Status: Complete - id: 2833698
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The Faerie Tale of the Woman on the Docks
A woman stands on crumbling docks
Her hair is damp, her face is pale
As sunlight touches mossy rocks
Her head tilts back and she'll let forth a wail
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The moon rises high on those cold, dark nights
When the woman will stand, awaiting her lover
Who has taken her soul with his strange faerie lights
And had captured her heart in their odd glowing cover
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She'd been a young girl in that faerie ring
The winged creatures danced and took her by the hands
Her years flew by her as they started to sing
Then soon she was flying to the faeries' lands
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The beast who had stolen her soul away
To make her his own forevermore
Was handsome in a bold, dark way
But he was cruel to his vile faerie core
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He'd grown bored quickly of the woman's devotion
So he took her away to this soggy shore
She bears youth eternal, soul lost to the ocean
The woman will wait forevermore
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Her loved one had left her on that cold, dark shore
Left her to wait for his assured coming
To make her his wife, he said was in store
So then she waits, her skin slowly numbing
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The woman stands on crumbling docks
Her hair is damp, her face is pale
As sunlight touches the mossy rocks
Her head tilts back and she'll let forth a wail.
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