|Of Your Eyes and My Ice Skater Thighs
Author: Eiya Weathes PM
What’s with me and bumping into hot guys with even hotter accents both literally and figuratively? No idea, but I think I need a cup of Starbucks to keep me sane. It doesn’t really help that I’m slightly boy-obsessed. Skittle sticks.Rated: Fiction T - English - Humor - Words: 249 - Reviews: 56 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 24 - Updated: 04-04-11 - Published: 10-23-10 - id: 2858236
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Hey all. This is Cee.
No, I am not abandoning this story. I just realized that this work of mine is kind of crappy. (At least from my point of view.) I believe that I can possibly write better than this.
There are parts and scenes that come off to me as choppy and there are a lot of things that aren't explained well. I do believe that sometimes, Madeline seems to be a five year old instead of nineteen. I mean yes, it's part of her character to be immature but I need to set some limits.
There is also the "Brett" Issue. No, I am not writing him off of my story. Instead, I'll be changing quite a few things with his character starting with his name. Let's be honest: Brett Brian Beverly Basted is a horrible, horrible name. I don't know what force of nature made me come up of that name. Really.
So yes, I've taken down the chapters so that I could reread them and try to mold them into better ones. ;)
There won't be any major rewrites or plot changes.
Anyway, the chapters will be posted again in a few days. I hope that you would wait for them. Thanks for taking the time to read this!
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