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Shattered
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A collection of poems I wrote centering vaguely around the same topic. Please please please read and review! ... 'On the ladder of life, you are forever above me, just one rung, but still above me, always slightly better'
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 2 - Words: 460 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 01-26-11 - Published: 01-24-11 - id: 2885104
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A/N Hello!! I'd just like to say that this is the first poem I've put on here (it's quite scary!!). I'm normally more of a story-writing person, so I really don't know why I've randomly started writing poems (maybe I'm possessed!!). Anyway, I'd really, really like to know what people think, since I honestly don't know how good it is (probably not very good, but we'll have to wait and see). Anyway. Enjoy, and please please please review!! Thanks! XD

I am the straw hut,

You are the brick house.

I the ant,

Small, ugly, stupid,

You the giraffe,

Tall, beautiful, graceful.

Better are you

Than the elephant,

Large and clumsy,

Easily scared.

Not even a mouse am I,

Not good enough;

Better you at one thing

I cannot.

On the ladder of life,

You are forever above me,

Just on rung,

But still above me,

Always slightly better.

Though I strive to reach up

And climb beside you

Your foot slips

And though you keep your balance

Your perfection

It hits my hand

As I struggle

I have no balance,

No perfection,

To keep

You do not notice

I crash to the ground

Shattered

For people to tread upon

And walk over

And break.

You didn't mean to

You didn't know

Perhaps you thought that

I climbed beside you

I didn't

I don't now

For I

Am shattered.

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