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Ode to Paradise
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Trinaluv33 PM
A short little poem about my little cabin in the woods. I hope you enjoy it. : If you like, you could take the short time to review and tell me what you think. Feedback would be great!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 127 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 07-15-11 - Status: Complete - id: 2933161
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Ode to Paradise

I love the smell of the water though to most it's unappealing,

I love the taste of the coffee even though the cups are peeling.

There could be a raccoon in the outhouse, I couldn't care,

I traverse the ravine though there's a bear.

The garage, stuffed full of junk- I see treasure,

Smoke rising from the burner fills me with pleasure.

The feel of dirt under my feet, 64 acres of trees,

The deer blind glimmers in the summer heat, I can't approach for there's bees.

Forget the gun, I only hunt morels,

The woods raise my pride and nourish my morals.

It's pouring rain, but I won't come in;

Forget paradise, this is my cabin.

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