
a pedestrian phenomenon of left and right *new: complete version*
Rated: Fiction T - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-10-11 - Published: 07-16-11 - Status: Complete - id: 2933494
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alignment
lines draw tourists
to the canal:
a pedestrian
phenomenon of
right and left
crossing paths,
mapping spatially
some nonsense,
or does it make sense?
sight and sounds
resound, bounded
by choices;
left to right this,
a place where line
and spaces are more
than universal languages
a/n: I live in a very touristy place, I won't disclose particulars, but one of our main attractions is a scenic canal and it runs along most of the city.
btw, it's unfinished, and I gave up ending it properly...ideas?
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