
Poem. Pretty short. Doesn't rhyme much at all. Based on my life. Sort of sad but happy, too. Don't know how else to describe it. Only rated T for one swear word, but it's not that bad at all.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Words: 397 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10-15-11 - Status: Complete - id: 2961315
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Here's another poem from me. Don't really know how to describe it so I guess I'll let you decide. It's based on my true life, as are all my FP poems. :)
It Overcomes Me
I've seen joy and,
I've seen pain
Felt my heartbeat,
So damn quickly.
I know the feeling
It overcomes me
Something I can't change
It overcomes me
Like an unbroken chain
Strong and cold
Waiting for someone
To see past the rust,
Past the cold,
Look at only it
Just like me.
Here I am,
Waiting for you
Can't you see?
Compatible on so many levels
Don't know how to shout it out
Scream at the world
Sometimes I want out
It only lasts a little while
I'd never give up
I just want you
Do you want me, too?
Am I just dreaming,
Or is that a smile on your face?
Seems like years
Since I've been this happy.
Trying to give you room
Your space is important
Don't want to intrude
But never want to leave.
Do my eyes give me away?
Can you see it now?
Could you always?
I think everyone else knew,
Except us.
Feel like everyone's staring at me
Waiting for a reply
Wanting to know what I'll do
If I'll wait for you
They don't have to ask
Even if it takes years
I'm patient, understanding
She still means that much to you
So you're blind, too
If it were up to me
I'd be by you in a heartbeat
Never to say 'bye
Only hello.
Can't get this smile to leave
Until I have to go
Then I think about you
And I think about her
How you're not right together
You just don't see it yet.
I'll be patient
Wait until that day
You'll call me up
Ask me what you mean to me
I'll tell you the truth
Always did, always will.
As I drive away
It overcomes me
My smile only fades
Because you're not near
So I sit in silence
On the verge of tears
Waiting to see my prince
The one I've known for years.
Hope you liked it. Things are looking up so my poem does the same. Mostly... Okay, sort of. ;)
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