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 Broken
Author: Abbey Grimm Dawn  PM
This is a short poem based on suicide. Obviously it's my first uploaded poem on this site, so be honest with the reviews, and NO FLAMES. It'll be good for future readers if constructive criticism is given. This may not be angsty, so sorry if it's not.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Words: 92 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Published: 10-28-11 - Status: Complete - id: 2965090
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Broken:
Walking through the shadows
Running from creatures of the night
Closing up her mouth so that
She will not hear her fright
Upon reaching her destination
Smiles a smile
Of regret
Goes jumps off the high cliff and screams with
Second thoughts and something else
When she reaches bottom
There's a crack, her life's snapped
In a flickering instant
There's her body, with no soul...
She finally broke
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