
This is a sad love poem I wrote. Please review.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Poetry/Romance - Words: 166 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-03-11 - Status: Complete - id: 2976452
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Saturday, December 03, 2011
Remember
I remember when you were
By my side all day and night
I miss those days
I wish you were still here
Now that your gone nothings
The same
I remember when you would
Come over to see me
Those days were so nice
Sometimes you'd bring me flowers
I remember when you said
You'd always love me
When you said you wanted
Me for yours and only yours
I said I would have you
And only you, always
I remember your expression
The joy you showed when
I said I loved you
Then you said you had
Something to ask me
You wanted to know if
I would marry you
I remember feeling shock
At you asking me
But I knew I loved you
And only you
So, I had to say yes
I remember your smile
It was so strong and big
I had never seen it so big
I was happy and so were you
Please review. Alison
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