
Just a silly love poem I wrote. Please review.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Poetry/Humor - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-03-11 - Status: Complete - id: 2976453
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Saturday, December 03, 2011
Saloon Man
His face flashes before my face
It takes my breath away
And causes me pain
I get a weird thrill
Everytime I see you
I wish I understood
Your face is different
Very handsome and sweet
I wish I knew you better
Everytime I try to speak
I lose my voice
You have power over me
You really are amazing
You can sing like no other
And your dancing
It's unbelievable
I wish I could tell you
How I feel about you
I wish you knew
Your face is constantly in my mind
Your voice leaves me
Before your face does
You are in my dreams
I couldn't keep you out
You are everything to me
To a man named David
You work at the saloon
at S.D.C.
Thank you.
Please review. Alison
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