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You Said You'd Stay
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this is a song i wrote. it is OK but you be the judge of that. feedback would be nice. possitive or negative
Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Words: 310 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-29-11 - Status: Complete - id: 2983750
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You Said You'd Stay

Verse 1: I cant think of what to say

When your with me I feel ok

But when you leave I get the feeling

That this is goodbye forever

Verse 2. Watching you just look away

Can't you look me in the eye?

Walk my way to just say hi?

Even if you mean goodbye

Chorus: you said you'd never leave me, standing in the pouring

Protect me from feeling pain

Watch me when I'm falling down

Hold me never let me go, and take my breath away,

You'd stay

Verse 3: I cant take the questions marks

In my head to think about

Is it yes or is it no?

Will you stay or will you go?

Chorus: you said you'd never leave me, standing in the pouring rain

Protect me from feeling pain

Catch me when I'm falling down

Hold me, never let me go, and take my breath away,

You'd stay

Bridge: I can't hide the love I feel

Burning deep inside of me

Chorus: but now I'm standing in the rain

You're the cause of my own pain

Now you left me all alone

You cant protect me from myself

Verse 4: I was right, right from the start

You just took my breath away

Just not the way I thought you would

Chorus: you said you'd never leave me standing in the rain

Protect me from feeling pain

Catch me when I'm falling down

Hold me never let me go

Take my breath away

Final: you didn't stay with me

Now I'm saying goodbye

Now I'll leave you standing in the pouring rain

Cause you to feel every pain

Let you fall right to the ground

Take your breath away

Spoken: you should have stayed

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