
this is a song i wrote. it is OK but you be the judge of that. feedback would be nice. possitive or negative
Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Words: 310 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12-29-11 - Status: Complete - id: 2983750
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You Said You'd Stay
Verse 1: I cant think of what to say
When your with me I feel ok
But when you leave I get the feeling
That this is goodbye forever
Verse 2. Watching you just look away
Can't you look me in the eye?
Walk my way to just say hi?
Even if you mean goodbye
Chorus: you said you'd never leave me, standing in the pouring
Protect me from feeling pain
Watch me when I'm falling down
Hold me never let me go, and take my breath away,
You'd stay
Verse 3: I cant take the questions marks
In my head to think about
Is it yes or is it no?
Will you stay or will you go?
Chorus: you said you'd never leave me, standing in the pouring rain
Protect me from feeling pain
Catch me when I'm falling down
Hold me, never let me go, and take my breath away,
You'd stay
Bridge: I can't hide the love I feel
Burning deep inside of me
Chorus: but now I'm standing in the rain
You're the cause of my own pain
Now you left me all alone
You cant protect me from myself
Verse 4: I was right, right from the start
You just took my breath away
Just not the way I thought you would
Chorus: you said you'd never leave me standing in the rain
Protect me from feeling pain
Catch me when I'm falling down
Hold me never let me go
Take my breath away
Final: you didn't stay with me
Now I'm saying goodbye
Now I'll leave you standing in the pouring rain
Cause you to feel every pain
Let you fall right to the ground
Take your breath away
Spoken: you should have stayed
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