
SCREENPLAY : Hailey and Logan need to survive with a great secret - no one can know... When all off the sudden the weather changes and great danger is coming, blood flows thicker than water, of does love conquers all?
Rated: Fiction M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,247 - Published: 02-14-12 - id: 2997027
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02) Night time
INT.- SOLDIERS CAFETERIA - NIGHT
Wide shot: Logan sits down in the cafeteria with Stan and J.D.
J.D. / JONAH DEREKS
This commander is going to kill me.
LOGAN REVIS
Isn't that what you said about the last one?
STAN BRUFEAU
And the one before? (giggling)
J.D. / JONAH DEREKS
Very funny, guys, very funny.
Medium Close-Up: To hailey who is making coffee behind the small bar
Hailey sneezes and drops the jug of coffee, spills the burning hot coffee over her hand and drops the jug on the floor.
HAILEY GRIMSHAW
Shit, no, please no. (murmuring)
wide shot showing hailey trying to clean the mess with her bare hands and the eating soldiers
Logan stands up and walks to Hailey. He helps her up and places her hand under cold water. Hailey tries to pull her hand away.
LOGAN REVIS
Don't pull, you have to cool it.
Logan rolls her sleeve a bit up. Bruises are shown. Hailey puts her sleeve down again and holds her hand under the water without counteraction.
LOGAN REVIS
You should have those checked.
HAILEY GRIMSHAW
There's nothing there.
COMM. JAY GRIMSHAW
What the hell happened here! (out of view)
close up comm. jay in the doorway, flashing back to hailey
Hailey jumps up and almost freezes.
LOGAN REVIS
Little accident.
COMM. JAY GRIMSHAW
You did this, didn't you? Course you did.
HAILEY GRIMSHAW
Sorry, sir.
COMM. JAY GRIMSHAW
Don't you 'sir' me!
HAILEY GRIMSHAW
Yes, Commander.
COMM. JAY GRIMSHAW
You, clean this mess up. You, report to Commander Steveson. That goes for you ladies too!
medium close up going from j.d. & stan who jump up back to the commander.
J.D. / JONAH DEREKS
Sir, yes, sir!
STAN BRUFEAU
Sir, yes, sir!
Logan, J.D. & Stan walk away. Comm. Jay walks closer to Hailey.
Medium Close up: Jay & Hailey, face to face, when hailey jumps on her toes show their feet
Jay grabs Hailey's arm and pinches it hard. Hailey bits her lip and jumps to her toes, as she tries not to scream.
COMM. JAY GRIMSHAW
You're paying for that yourself, Missy. Why can't you just be like Ethan and Audrey?
Comm. Jay walks away, Hailey grabs her arm and watches him leave.
EXT. - FIELD CAMP - NIGHT
Wide shot: view flies over field with several soldiers standing and slowly laying down in the field, all facing towards the hills
medium close up: keep close to Ethan, logan and thom. switch between their faces, try to keep two faces in one frame
Logan & Thom quickly crouch towards Ethan and 2other soldiers. Logan taps them on their shoulder.
LOGAN REVIS
You guys need to report to the commander.
The two nod and leave. Ethan turns around.
ETHAN GRIMSHAW
(shaking hands) Grimshaw, Ethan
LOGAN REVIS
(shaking the hand)Revis, Logan. This is Thom, McGrag.
Ethan rolls back and stares back through his SC-98
THOMAS MCGREG
So, you're 'the son of'?
ETHAN GRIMSHAW
You know, I have my own identity.
Logan smirks and Ethan gives him a smile. Logan looks over his shoulder and gives Thom a small kick with his feet.
LOGAN REVIS
Watch your mouth, probie.
medium close up logan jumps up, snake is biting his arm
ETHAN GRIMSHAW
Not good, Thom get a medic! Logan, freeze!
LOGAN REVIS
Freeze! There's a snake, a fu-
Before Logan can finish his sentence, he fades and falls on the ground. Ethan jumps on the snake and kneels besides Logan.
ETHAN GRIMSHAW
Medic! I need a medic over here!
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