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If you stand in one place in a busy city for long enough, the constant flow of people makes you feel as if the whole world is walking by as you watch. Feedback welcome, especially thoughts on rhyme scheme.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 48 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 02-18-12 - Status: Complete - id: 2998192
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As I stand and watch
I see the world walk by
people from all walks of life
all kinds of strife
walk along
then they're gone
in they float and away they fly
Author's Note
short and sweet feedback very welcome for this especially
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