
First attempt at rhyme and rhythm, in iambic tetrameter. "When languor turns to bitter guile."
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Words: 159 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 03-01-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3001802
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Complexity
February 20, 2012
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No languor falls as sharp as ours
beneath the cherry budding tree.
No hope can hide frail bitter scars
When 'you and I' becomes just 'me'.
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While quick like sobbing rain it falls-
the civil'ty of human needs
gives way to cold, aversive gall
and makes the burning match of me.
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Our ceasefire deal is weakly sick,
this false pretense of safety met.
But there beneath the faded bricks
of over-arching hopes turned debt,
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the bloody corpse, of dreams now gone.
And how could you mend bridges burned?
Your moral worth mixed right with wrong,
still I owe tax for lies unturned?
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Now stale blooms caress our eyes,
this mockery* turns uttered words
to wasted talk, too old for lies.
Teeth speak of venom, voice unheard.
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When languor turns to bitter guile,
in used up time, the clock will die.
The bias caught inside a smile
will ask of us to sever ties.
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