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Independence Days
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skersey PM
As with Light Warrior, I would also like suggestions with this one. About the presence of false freedom. Not sure how to continue with it.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Words: 73 - Published: 03-10-12 - id: 3004152
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"Independence Days"

All they want are

Their independence days.

They want to use 13-letter words

Freely,

Like Bible guys speaking to God,

From where the wisdom comes

And spirit flows.

But what they don't know

Is that nightcrawlers shake hands

With shadow slayers.

They're the invertebrates

That make this place as formless

As those before them.

McSaunters, McSanders, McDonald's, McPeople.

You could color me blind

With their independence days.

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