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A Cruel Twist Of Fate
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Coleman and Sara are childhood friends who strike up a romance. Everything goes well until he is hit by a car and doesn't remember who she is. Will he remember her but will it be too late by then?
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 12 - Words: 4,213 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 04-12-12 - Published: 03-11-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3004274
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The penultimate chapter

For the next two weeks, Sara tried to avoid Coleman until she met him in the park

He asked Sara, "Do you ever think about what would have happened if I hadn't been hit by that car?"

Sobbing, Sara says, "All the time. It breaks my heart to think about the fact that you were on your way to propose to me"

Coleman said, "Getting hit by that car changed me for the worse. I pushed away the one woman I care about so much"

Sara sobs, "It's not your fault. Paris should be to blame. She told lies to you and that tore us apart, Coleman. Because of that, we had the whole thing with George which soured things up for us"

Coleman said, "I never stopped loving you, Sara. I tried to deny it but I can't do it anymore. I love you. Always have, always will"

It started raining then Sara says, "How about a little kiss in the rain?"

Coleman says, "I'm dying to kiss you," then they kissed passionately in the rain

Coleman and Sara walked home together then he stayed the night at her apartment

The next morning, Coleman says, "Would you like for us to be together again?"

Sara says, "I would love that," then they kissed each other again

Share your thoughts on the penultimate chapter

What did you expect to happen in this chapter?

Did you expect Sara and Coleman to reunite?

The final chapter reveals what happened to Coleman and Sara afterwards. What do you think will have happened to them?

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