
What does the word truce mean to you? Is it the relief of a pause in conflict...or does it leave a bitter taste in your mouth? Very keen to hear any feedback on this one
Rated: Fiction T - English - Poetry/Suspense - Words: 148 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 03-12-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3004553
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Like the smell of gas
lingering on the air.
With burnt diary pages,
the words un-legible
full of stories never to be told
and lost personas;
scattered on the dying grass.
So rough to touch.
The metallic tang on the back
of your throat
tastes like blood
from the night before
and the night before that
and before that
in fact
whole years of yesterdays.
"You'll want some honey for that."
He said.
His calloused hand outstretched
Cold and clammy
Unnatural.
Like white noise
on a warm summer's day.
Where the trees blow
in the sweetheart breeze.
But the birds in the canopy
don't sing a note, not a single melody.
And everything is bitter.
With the toxins of war.
In this charade:
Called truce.
A/N: I played around with this a bit and I would love your opinion on this piece. xx
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