Author: mktoddsparky PM
And that's all it takes to make me believe that maybe you care. I think you do. I think you're just afraid of our shadow./ Or, a little moment and a thousand thoughts.Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Angst - Words: 236 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 04-09-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3012144
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Wrote this earlier in class. Just needed to vent, is all. I don't even know what this is exactly, just a few insignificant little feelings, perhaps. I didn't know whether to classify this as a story or a poem. It kind of sounds like a poem, so that's what I'm making it. Reviews are ever welcome (:
Oh, and I listened to Who Am I to Say by Hope while writing this.
It's like you-
Eyes soft. Voice soft.
-it's like. Like you care. And-
Soft fingers, dancing, burning a path of fire.
On. My wrist.
All "Come here" and "thank you,"
Teeth sliding over the tip of your tongue
pulling, chest against chest, soul against soul, hearts pl-
playing a correlated rhythm, all their own desire, out of control.
It's like you-
It's kind of like you love my fingers sliding across your smooth back,
love my soft hair splayed against your broad shoulder
blue (nice-girl-nice Christian-girl) and
brown (harsh-words butsosoft to me, faltering hope) eyes
keep meeting, gasping, drowning.
Saying everything, nothing-
Look deep into me. Find. Me out.
Arms tight. Loose.
for me. And that's all it takes
to make me believe that you-
that you care.
I think you do. I think you're just afraid of our shadow.