
My life unravels like a red ribbon...red, ruby, crimson, claret. This came to me very suddenly and practically flowed out my pen, feedback most welcome please R&R.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 04-14-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3013414
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My life unravels like a red ribbon
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Before my very eyes
and with each ruby strand that comes loose
another follows it in turn
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And eventually
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My life is no longer a crimson uniformed ribbon
tied in a enflamed regal bow
it is a mess of silken claret lengths
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Broken and unusable
made irreparable
By your careless hand
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