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Once Upon a Time
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A fairy tale story, told in free-verse poems. Not sure if they're any good, but I enjoy writing them. Not too sure about the category. Critiques and advice appreciated.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 680 - Published: 04-20-12 - id: 3015098
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We got three new transfer students,

Over break.

Two girls,

And one boy.

Kelly,

The older girl,

Was hot.

And,

Had pretty nice hair.

It reached

Down her back,

And,

Curled at her left shoulder.

Kona,

Was plain.

Even though,

She sounded exotic.

The only thing that seemed,

At least a little bit,

Hawaiian,

Was her skin.

Her toffee skin.

I liked her.

Her voice had a lilt to it,

And she spoke two other languages.

Michael,

Was annoying.

He had dark hair,

A stupid grin,

And mussels.

I didn't like him.

He tried too hard,

At all the wrong things.

Even though,

I could tell,

He's not very creative.

It was in his fingers.

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