
My first haiku Come and read how I messed up ENJOY!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 92 - Published: 04-29-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3017861
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The Ocean is dancing
While the breeze is singing
And the moon is watching
Author's note
Hello~ This is the first haiku I have ever done. I know it's not following what it will be considered as "traditional", this is more like a freestyle haiku haha. Anyways this is a haiku with personifications in every line. I did it for literature class. I hope to get at least a good grade. Also I hope you've liked it~
Feel free to review~~
bye bye~
(oh my God! I overuse tildes)
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