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My first poem! Not really a summary, but I would like some constructive criticism.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 46 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 05-22-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3024765
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Open
Open the mind
To see the world
In a way
It has never been before
Open the eyes
To see the soul
Though only a window
Reveal so much more
Open the heart
To break the ice
And play a simple game
Of lovers' dice
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