|My Sarcastic 10 Year Old Mind
Author: In Case You Haven't Noticed PM
In case you haven't noticed, this is a poem that I wrote when I was 10. It's very interesting, according to my sister. Half rhymes and half doesn't. Rated K plus for safety, though there really isn't anything in it-no language or violence or anything. Little kids just might not understand the point of the poem.Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Humor/Fantasy - Words: 159 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 05-28-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3026633
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"'My mind, blank as a pillow's head,
Has wandered to the Land of Dead.
I searched and searched and found instead
Miles and miles of land ahead.
I looked in the mountains, under the snow,
And discovered a war of thoughts arow. -I invented that word, FYI.
I found my mind, but yet, alas,
For there I slumbered in the grass.
When I returned to the Land of Wake,
I found a thought in a nearby lake.
I swam and caught it carefully
In my mind,' I quoted with intense sarcasm,
Noticing the fact that the last bit did not rhyme,
And that irritated me quite a bit,
It irritated me so much that I decided to stop writing this poem.
But that, sometimes, is inevitable.
Some people don't know what that means,
But some people do.
Those people would probably know one more word
Than other people. Just like this poem, children,
Just like this poem."