Author: XxNeonShadowsxX PM
Because it was the best ten minutes of my summer so far, too. Just something I wrote last night after someone special did something special for me. Not my best, but I'm too lovestruck to care. [Edit: I hate the new title, but I had to change it because 'Lovestruck makes much more sense for another poem I will be posting soon]Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Romance/Friendship - Words: 195 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 05-31-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3027685
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Shaking all the way home,
I still can't seem to breathe,
Or believe that you went through all that trouble
Just for one dance with me.
I'm sure I would be dreaming of you,
But I know I won't get any sleep,
That's how I can tell I've fallen,
I've fallen fast, hard and deep.
I'm feeling too much to be put into words,
But writing seems to be all I can do,
Other than stay up all night hoping
That you're feeling this much, too.
A/N: I realize this isn't my best work (read that last stanza one more time), but I'm posting it anyway, because the title is "Lovestruck" for a reason.
EDIT: Sorry for any confusion (for the one person who favorited this), but I had to change the title because Lovestruck makes more sense as the title of another poem I will be posting soon (sometime in the next two weeks). I actually kind of hate this new one, but I couldn't come up with anything else, so I went with it anyway.