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Rated: Fiction T - English - Poetry/Romance - Words: 27 - Published: 06-05-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3029482
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fingerprints,
cool and skating over skin
skimming
peppermints
breath on breath
reeling
dew drops
rose bud on my lips
coalescing
nighttime
summer breezing through
and you linger
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