|Grief and the Four Elements
Author: xFiresoulxCrookshanksx PM
A Series of free-verse poems following the grief of a young girl whose best friend was murdered. Please give it a chance.Rated: Fiction T - English - Tragedy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 6 - Words: 740 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 07-09-12 - Published: 06-09-12 - id: 3030244
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A/N So I came up with this last night and thought I'd share. Please read and review!
We had a long happy friendship.
Sure there were
and times when we argued
But that's in the
Right now as I stand over
reading the carved
through blurry eyes,
all our happy memories come
rushing back like
spreading through my mind like
a forest fire;
drifting in and out of focus like
the wind and air;
rooting themselves in secure places like
the rocks in loose earth.
Funny how the
can relate to my emotions as
streaked my face, and hit
the ground, mixing with the rain
as it poured down on
soaking my clothes as I remembered
Please review, and let me know if I should continue!