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Rated: Fiction T - English - Words: 127 - Published: 06-13-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3032000
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Do Not Dwell
Confusion devours this heart of mine
Was that a spark upon my lips?
Dancing across my tongue?
One brief flash of light
A burst of warmth to melt my ice
I dare not question the sensation
Dare not dwell on a hopeless cause
For so long my heart of stone has hardened
The key lost deep within the depths
A hole so immense I had thought it never to be filled
Yet a tiny spark dances on my lips
My body aching for more
My skin does not crawl at the thought
Electricity buzzes just beneath the surface
The shimmering vale is lifted
And I actually like what lay beyond
Do not dwell on a hopeless cause I say
But is it hopeless?
Truly?
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