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Rated: Fiction T - English - Words: 168 - Published: 06-13-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3032003
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Cold Waters
Smooth ice unmarred by bladed skates
Fresh, new, gleaming, seamless
Seemingly safe
Like glass
Yet carefully I tred across its surface
For secrets are hidden in the glass
The edges my seem safe
But as I move closer to the heart
I skate on thin ice
My weight cracks the surface
Spider webs move across the glass
Growing, expanding, spreading through the glass
Marring its surface
The glass around me gives way
I crash through the heart
Cold waters await me
Every bit of warmth stripped from me
Encased in ice I know I am dead
I let the waters take me
Their swift arms carry me farther and farther
Yet somehow the glass above me breaks
Warm hands grasp mine
They pull me into their warm embrace
Even though it is not him
I feel somewhat safe
I am finally warm
He saved me from the cold watery depths of my despair
And here I stay forever in his arms
Finally safe…
Loved…
In love…
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