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Rated: Fiction T - English - Horror - Words: 140 - Published: 06-13-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3032019
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Lonely Path
Long lonely path
With ghostly trees
Hallowing winds
And menacing eyes
Footsteps echo down this lonely path
A sense of foreboding follows
Death lurks nearby
You know it to be true
Catching glimpses of those menacing eyes
You know it to be true
The wind whips and howls
Drowning out all other sounds
Afraid for your life you run faster
And faster still
Loosing breath with every step
Your life slowly draining
The trees stretch ghostly hands to ensnare you
To catch you unaware
The ground loosens underneath your feet
Your shoes sinking further into the muck
Spider webs cross your path
You run through them uncaring
Yet unbenonced to you spiders now cover you
Their pincers sinking in
Their poisons spreading rapidly
For death comes on swift wings to those who run in the face of death
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