
Please critique
Rated: Fiction T - English - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 06-13-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3032030
|
|
A+ A- |
Emerald Green
Envious luminous green
Piercing and intelligent
A deep dense forest
Wild and intense
They pin you in place
Immobilizing and enchanting
Deep emerald green
Filled with passion
So much life
You can't look away
Getting lost in a green haze
Their gaze mesmerizing
When it falls upon you
Your breathing stops
Your heart years to know more
To explore those deep emerald greens
To get lost in their depth
That dense forest
Forever
|
||||||