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Rated: Fiction T - English - Words: 93 - Published: 06-13-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3032031
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Paradise
Beaches pure whit and unmarred
An orange sun rising at the water's edge
A single set of footsteps trails the shore
Curious you follow
Print by print
A cave awaits you
Dark and menacing
Such a contrast to the paradise around you
The voice of a boy calls to you
Beckoning you closer
You follow cautiously
Unable to resist the temptation
Green eyes and the flash of a white smile greet you
Little do you know that smile is full of malice
As the green eyes devour you
Heart and soul
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