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Rated: Fiction T - English - Words: 122 - Published: 06-13-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3032032
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Everything Is Perfect
I see a beach
Clear blue waters
Made black by the night sky
The cool breeze chills me
You pull me close
Wrapping me in a blanket
I lean back against you
As we watch the first stars come our
Everything is perfect
Your warmth sooths me
Relaxing every part of me
You lean closer
Kissing my neck
Despite your warmth I shiver
Yet not with cold
I turn around
Facing you
Kissing you to no end
Here time does not force us to part
Everything is perfect
Wonderful
And I am in love with you
Even though we aren't on some beach
And we aren't kissing under the stars
I am still in love with you
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