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Rated: Fiction T - English - Words: 89 - Published: 06-13-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3032033
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What is this?
What is this feeling?
This infectious disease
This burning desire
This gut retching feeling
This stomach churning
This aching of my body
This strenuous craving
This undeniable need
This rising of my temperature
This boiling of my blood
This fluttering of butterflies
This heart rate surging
This clouding vision
This sweating of my palms
This shaking of my voice
This trembling of my body
This floating on cloud nine
This unstoppable temptation
This insatiable urge
What is the cause of all this?
Oh yeah
Its love
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