|Fantasy Sugarcoated Paradise
Author: Dai-Light PM
The first poem i've ever published. Please if you have any suggestions about it's format that i should fix, or even about what kind of poem it could become if slightly fixed let please let me know.Please read ,its good:Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Fantasy - Words: 76 - Published: 06-13-12 - id: 3032053
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Fantasy Sugarcoated Paradise
Yellow and green sugar skies,
Coated with all sorts of sweet demise,
Swirling with bubblegum truths,
Rippling lakes of rubies and lights,
Dripping with venom and spite,
Spreading their deathly, corrupting franchise.
A beautiful wonderland indeed
Awaiting more of the naïve,
Awaiting more brimming with greed.
Expertly sculpted to deceive,
Courteously patient to achive, with extortion and lies,
Don't be fooled by the outside,
See deep inside,
Of our Fantastic paradise lives.