
Sad song based on a woman waiting for her husband to come back from sea. T just in case.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Words: 392 - Published: 06-19-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3033870
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So, I kinda made up a song (that actually sounds good to me) but it's hard to put a beat into words, so here's a key.
*'ed lines are slow and kinda soft with varying amounts of space between them.
-'ed lines are slightly fast and have a more upbeat tune to them.
+'ed lines are transition lines that are kinda fast, but are starting to slow down.
*Down, down, down
*Fall the glass tears of a ghost
*No matter the drops that fall
*She forver is alone
*Cursed by the skin she wears
*And the misery she breathes
*She prays, she prays
*Let her sorrow cease
-And she cries, she cries
-Crying out to the sea
-Let her love come home
-'Come home back to me!'
-Let the tears stop falling
-Crashing to the ground
-Let her love come home
-Come home back around
-Let the tears stop falling
-Chase away the pain
-Washed away by love
+Like leaves in the rain
(Music Break)
*And still she waits here for him
*For the day he returns
*And comes back home to land
*Back home to her
*The waves crash down
*Carry news from the sea
*He's not coming home
*He's lost to the deep
-And she cries, she cries
-Crying out to the sea
-Let her love come home
-'Come home back to me!'
-Let the tears stop falling
-Crashing to the ground
-Let her love come home
-Come home back around
-Let the tears stop falling
-Chase away the pain
-Washed away by love
+Like leaves in the rain
(Long Music Break)
*In the chill of night
*'Tween the darkest hours
*He comes back to her
*Holding Death's flowers
*He takes her hand
*Leads her shore
*They step in together
*Forvever more...
*She no longer cries
*No longer with fears
*For they drown'd together
*In the salt of tears
(Soft Music)
+So let the tears stop falling
+Take away the pain
+Washed away by love
+Like leaves in the rain
And yeah, I know I didn't do too good on explaining how the music is, but I tried at least.
So... there ya' go! Review if you feel like it, tell me what you think.
What can improve?
What did I do pretty well on?
Let me know so I can get better!
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