My Idol's Iambic Pentameter

September 27th, 2011

Iambic pentameter format is 14 lines (Three groups of four lines, and one couplet at the end). 5 beats per line. ABAB format.

I call your name; My countenance perks up

Your perfect turn, grace me with your approach

I should stop staring. Oh, that might be rough

Can you tell I think about you the most?

You are like a God, but human instead

You own such perfection; I see no flaws

Releasing the creations from my head

Your critique is the world; your word is law

Your work, to me... superior to all

Still, you can find kindness inside to lend

My dream? To answer with help at your call

I'll follow you through to our journey's end

Eyes sparkle brightly, feet just graze the floor

Don't turn away; you'll miss The Holy Lord