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Addiction
Author: CARAMELLDANSEN9009  PM
My first poem and piece on this site. Please be gentle with the reviews, however, you can give me helpful criticism! I wouldn't mind if you could tell me how to improve. Thanks to those who actually clicked on this poem! : I would like to thank MusiKina and Samsonet for the friendly criticism! Hopefully it's a bit better than last time. :
Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance - Words: 107 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 07-26-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3045161
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An addiction.
A drug.
It's intoxicating.
The smell. … When it's near me, I'm bombarded with the smell of mint.
The taste. … When I feel It on my lips, I taste coffee
The touch. … The way it holds my hand, touch my waist, it sends electric shocks
To see it every day is a gift on its' own.
I absolutely love it.
The drug… it tastes sweet. Sour. And DEFINITELY Spicy.
The smell… is hard to place, but it smells like him, something wonderful and addicting, something you
can't get out of your mind.
I'm intoxicated.
I've found my drug.
And that's,
You, My Love.
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