
I was losing my best friend to someone else. They wanted to be adults and do things adults do. I didn't want to be involved. But if I moved on I would loose her completely.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry - Words: 158 - Reviews: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 07-31-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3046571
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Moving On
Enraged and angry, reversal of facts
Blaming one selves for natural paths
Violating, executing once strong pacts
Of pure youth smiles and innocent laughs
All for the transparent monotone of aged teens
Bearing the cloned black funeral attire
Painted faces of cold machines
Drunken mirage of oblivion, tears of fire `
Personified age yet toddler animosity
Of denied rights conjured by peers
Mesmerised of unanswered curiosity
How to move on when friends would disappear
Transfixed in the shadows of dangerous black
Moving on is easy, it's what you leave behind that can beckon you backā¦
Thank you if you read this. It's my first upload on this site and I wrote it earlier this year when I was 14. If you want an explanation comment. Reviews would be nice, I like contructive critism so don't worry about affending me. I'm only going to get better if you give your honest opinion. Thanks again. :)
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