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Moon and Sun
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RunningGuitarMaster PM
This is just a short poem about the Sun and the Moon, and what they make me feel like. No flames please, and if you review, it'll make me feel like I did a good job!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Friendship/Poetry - Words: 156 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 08-10-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3049473
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Hello readers! I just thought of this a couple months ago, and now I finally have a chance to post it! Please, no critisizm, I am just a very young person wanting to share a poem with you. That is all! Thank you everyone!

In the night the moon is there, sometimes hidden by the dark clouds.

In the daylight the sun is there, but too bright to look at.

The moon and sun are siblings in a way; because they are always there to guide us and light our way,

Through life; they give us encouragement because they are so high up.

So when the moon is high in the sky, it makes me feel like I can do everything, it being so proud up there.

And when the sun is high in the sky, it makes me feel like I can do anything, it being so proud up there.

Thanks for reading! Review! Please?

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