
An attempt at meter. Short poem of the meanings of words and the issues of those who understand it, told mostly in subtext.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 08-13-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3050117
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AUTHOR: Aeriel Holman
ACTIVITY: Iambic Meter Homework
Words: 18
DATE: May 1, 2012 (created)
NOTES: This was a homework assignment working with pentameter and tetrameter and the like. So, there are five segments of this homework that I liked and fixed up. I warn you now; for the sake of creativity and substance I totally flubbed the meter. Some of the lines will have that dum-dee-dum-dee-dum rhythm… others… not so much. I've also chopped up the lines. This is the second group of practice homework that I really enjoyed.
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Word to the Wise
Forgive me mother…
I sin again.
There plummets sages…
laughing the while.
To desire…
is not to acquire.
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