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This Is The Story Of A Girl
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My first ever poem! It's actually kind of depressing. It talks about girls and whats wrong in their life cancer, pregnancy, bullying, etc... I will write happier alter egos soon as well as a male version. I NEED FEEDBACK PLEASE! I sound so needy. I'm sorry. But subscribe, review, and enjoy! : I will update this pretty frequently!
Rated: Fiction T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Words: 414 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 08-16-12 - id: 3051031
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Hey guys! I wrote my first EVER poem today, and I'm pretty amazed. I've never tried before. Okay, I know it's depressing, but I'm going to write happy alter egos for each stanza :) I wrote a male version too. Please review! Thanks peep-lets! :D
~ Mik Mik


~Hidden Emotions~

This is the story of a girl.
The girl who hides behind her smile
The girl who laughs when she wants to cry
The girl who sings when she wants to scream
The girl who looks like a rock but feels like slime
That is the story of a girl..

~Past Lover~

This is the story of a girl.
The girl who yearns for a past lover
The girl who never truly moved on
The girl who can't stop thinking about *HIM*
The girl who wants to throw herself in his arms
That is the story of a girl...

~Eczema Skinned~

This is the story of a girl.
The girl who hides inside of baggy clothing
The girl whose skin is scarred and raw
The girl who cant stop clawing at herself
The girl with the alligator skin
That is the story of a girl...

~Cancer Victim~

This is the story of a girl.
The girl who wishes for a longer life
The girl who desperately wants her life back
The girl who wants hair she doesn't have
The girl who feels like a burden and lost case
That is the story of a girl...

~Suicidal Wreck~

This is the story of a girl.
The girl who gets made fun on
The girl who goes home and cries
The girl who believes she is worthless
The girl who wants to end her life
That is the story of a girl...

~Pregnant Mistaken Teen~

This is the story of a girl.
The girl who thought it was "true love"
The girl who let him take her innocence
The girl whose boyfriend left when the baby was born
The girl whose life was ruined in 8th grade
That is the story of a girl...


I will probably write more later, so subscribe if you liked it! PLEASE GIVE ME FEEDBACK! I need to know how I did by people who actually know what they're doing :P I AM going to post the guy version as well as their alter egos in a SEPERATE STORY! So subscribe to me if you want to read more. Thanks guys! Love ya!

~ Mik Mik

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