Firstly- if you are here, thank you.

Secondly, I'd just like to say this is my first time publishing a story, and I'm super excited to get any constructive criticism and am open to all opinions and viewpoints- just don't be mean!

Lastly, I'm only putting the idea for this story up right now, to see what kind of response it gets. So here goes!

During life, Alice Hathaway was, many respects, a loser. To put it frankly, her life sucked. She had no friends, and was bullied constantly because of her "loner nerd" tag and the fact that quite simply, most people did not understand her.

But oh, how the tables can turn.

The night her peers spent drinking and partying-the night that was supposed to be the pinnacle of teenage life, Alice Hathaway was murdered. Bitten by a vampire and left to die, her body was found by a mysterious group called the Guardians. They have been watching Alice closely, biding their time, and her body dissapears. See, the guardians knew about Alice. They knew she had gifts, and they knew that, if the tables were to turn, Alice Hathaway could help them wage an underworld war on an army of sadistic vampires hellbent on causing mayhem and murder across the United States. She becomes the beautiful, talented, revered Alice Hunter, an immortal vampire committed to an agenda of saving lives, and also to a dark, personal revenge...When her past life comes back to haunt her, can Alice bring herself to save, join and even love those who so viciously tormented her?

Should I can it? Continue? Please review and let me know! xx