Author: DracoRunner PM
Yen is a boy who was never meant to be a child of destiny. He now has a dark power that is strong enough to oppose anyone who dare stand in his way. he must now learn how to wield it or risk the world as we know it. He must now travel down the road as a hero but who knew that the all powerful dark power could be so annoying.Rated: Fiction T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,433 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 09-02-12 - Published: 08-25-12 - id: 3053412
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I'm switching the pov to see if it's better.
Expect the unexpected
My head was in utter pain as I slowly woke from my dream. After my little pain I opened my eyes only to see some type of castle in ruin all around me. Chunks of concrete were everywhere that it wasn't even funny.
'What the hell happened here?' I thought to myself as I started to look around more.
The only thing that I found was a broken shard that reflected the sun. As I tilted it I got a god look at myself. I had snow white silvery hair that reached my shoulders, Red ruby eyes that seemed to give of some aura, and a little fang at the right side of my mouth. I was surprised to say nonetheless.
"I didn't know hair could spike up like that" I told myself as I set it down. I looked over myself and was slightly disgusted. Don't get me wrong I was fit for someone my age… assuming I can remember that. I wore dirty old brown rags that seemed to barely keep me decent.
"Sigh…" I was very confused. I woke up with no memory of whatever my life transpired until now and I wasn't freaking out. Instead of dwelling on it I decided I'm not going to get answers here, so why not just go where the wind blows.
"Guess there's no time like the present… since I kind of have no past" I gave a sour look to myself as I moved forward. It was really nice walking like this. The constant pain in the back of my mind seemed to go away as well.
I felt at peace with myself as I continued to walk onward wherever.
My body moved on its own as I dodged a sword which would have left me headless. I backfliped out of another slash mark giving me some distance from my attacker.
"Well look at the little acrobat here" a voice said with a snarl.
I looked at him forgetting my actions from before. He looked like some lizard with armor put on him. He held the sword which he tried to kill me with in a weird stance. His tongue was just dangling there with drool just hanging there. All in all it was a gross sight.
I blinked three times at the voice knowing that neither I nor the lizard said it. I shook my head ignoring what I heard but in the process I had ignored the lizard mans speech.
"-nd that's why you should just cower in fear of our race!" He yelled at me while charging.
There was a second were I stiffened before my body moved on its own again. I was surprised at how I reacted to everything. Nho matter what the lizard did he couldn't touch me. A smirk grew on my6 face as I decided to have some fun.
"I'm sorry were you doing something right now" I said in a bored tone while mentally chuckling to myself.
The lizard man just snorted before getting more violent. As this went on I decided I had enough of this and went to end it. I aimed at his head as I moved in for the kick. All of a sudden I no longer felt the sensation that I got from before.
There was now a gash on my shoulder as I fell to the ground in pain. I clutched at my shoulder in order to prevent more blood from getting out. I was so busy on the wound that I almost forgot about the reptile. I rolled away where he stabbed his sword into the ground. I brought myself up and gave a hard roundhouse to his neck with a reassuring snap to it. He fell down with a thud that gave me a moment to relax now.
"That… Hah… hah… is something I don't want to experience again" I breathed out as I clutched my wound. As I walked to find the nearest clinic from the village the voice that appeared started to become louder with each minute. I wondered if it was my… what do you call those things that tell you what's right and wrong.
'What the hell, not a moment after I awake I get attacked and now there's a voice in my head screaming baka… whatever that means"
I continued my walk as I have no idea where I'm even going. Goes to show you should expect the unexpected.
So what do you think. give your honest review in a nice way.