
When you realize your closest friend is just too close, and you find out why. You are just a bit too sweet, and that sickens me. This piece had stanzas, but they would not show up when I submitted the it. Reviews are more than welcome.
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry/Friendship - Words: 96 - Published: 08-26-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3053572
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candy : coated
today i realized you are the sweetest person.
your honeyed-up heart
lovingly holding to me
the sappiest feelings of
candy – coated hatred.
your syrup-laden tongue
recklessly spitting me
the sweetest drops of
candy – coated insults.
your saccharine eyes
always flickering at me
those sugary pairs of
candy – coated glares.
your ambrosial hands
kindly pulling me
into these candied hugs of
candy – coated beatings.
today i realized you are nothing but poison.
you are a fatal drug
using sickening sweetness
to make me ill,
to make me die.
you are sickly
candy coated.
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