Author: Miles Montgomery PM
A team of superheroes is brought together to defend the earth. Crossovers, action, and superhumans galore. Be sure to review. Rated T for some language and content.Rated: Fiction T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 10 - Words: 13,503 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 05-19-13 - Published: 08-27-12 - id: 3053721
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Tried watching the Amazing Spider-man movie that came out and it froze at 75 minutes. Although honestly, I can say, that I don't care if I really see the end of it. It was boring and nowhere as good as the first three. I don't see what people liked about it. The actor who played Peter Parker/Spider-man was lame. The only good thing about the movie was the fact that they had him make the web shooters. But they messed up about the part about how Uncle Ben was shot. I completely agree with Stuart. It is not worth watching and Spider-man is my favorite Marvel hero. I just hate how they ruined him. The only Marvel movie worse than this one, was Ghost Rider 2. I couldn't even stand watching anymore after twenty five minutes.
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Issue #8: Downtime
Sylvester and Stuart sat in the dining area of their base, on break from classes.
"I watched the Amazing Spider-man last night," Stuart said.
"How was it?" Sylvester asked. "I haven't seen it yet."
"Lame," Stuart replied. "Watched it online. Glad I didn't pay to watch it in theatres. I would have felt like I wasted my money."
"What was wrong with it?"
"They botched the death of Uncle Ben. When he died, I felt no emotion over the scene. Uncle Ben seemed like a dictator anyways. The actor portraying Peter Parker and Spider-man seemed like he had no motivation and his jokes sucked. Then the Lizard just looked extremely crappy. One of the worst Marvel movies ever."
"Wow, guess I'm not missing much."
"Also, when Peter revealed to Gwen about who he was, she didn't even seem fazed. I mean, that's a huge secret. She should have been more amazed, instead of being like 'Whatever'. All in all, the whole movie sucked from beginning to end. I was so bored, that I didn't even care when he got the costume."
"I'll put in on my list of movies not to watch."
A tone sounded. "Well, back to class," Stuart said.
"You know, Sylvester started, "exactly how do they get a teacher in here anyways?"
Stuart only shrugged.
In the training room, Jake and Laura trained against each other to raise their physical prowess. Jessica trained to see exactly how long she could maintain her hellfire blasts. And Scott just pummeled a punching bag to release his aggression.
"I'm tired of being stuck in here," Scott said. "If I don't get out and get laid soon, I'm gonna snap."
"Don't look at me," Jessica said. "I still have no idea how my demon dna will react during pleasurable climax. I may just end up killing you."
"I'd die happy," he said, dropping his hands to his side and looking at her.
She stopped and looked down. "God, it's been months since I've been laid," she said. "But I'm not so sure."
"C'mon," he said. "I don't mind being your guinea pig."
She looked up at him. "Fine," she said. "But don't mention it to the others."
"My lips are sealed, babe."
"Call me 'babe' again, and you won't have any lips."
Elsewhere, Onderon was in his room. He was facing his mirror that seemed to glow. In the mirror was a figure.
"My plan is proceeding exactly as I have foreseen," Onderon said. "As soon as you give the word, I make my move."
"Excellent," hissed the figure with a monstrous voice. "Do not disappoint me. We've been planning this for too long."
"Yes, my master."
Jessica and Scott went into Scott's room. They closed and locked the door. Scott slammed Jessica into a wall, kissing her, and accidentally hitting the base-wide microphone.
The entire base heard a lot of breathing and kissing. Then they heard the sounds of clothing being pulled off. There was a sound like someone being dropped onto a bed.
"Come to daddy," they heard Scott's voice say.
Then there was some more movement, followed by giggling from Jessica, and then they heard two simultaneous gasps. Followed by more movement and then the sounds of Jessica moaning. This continued for about five minutes and then "OH SCOTT!" from Jessica and then a moan from Scott.
Stuart and Sylvester were just staring at the intercom.
"Dude," Sylvester said. "I wish that was me."
Stuart only laughed.
Then the base heard a slam as their door was broken over.
"Vous stupides, baise idiots!" they heard Julienne's voice said. "If you're going to have sex, do it on your own, without the whole base hearing. Merde!" Then they heard nothing.
Both Scott and Jessica stared at Julienne. Then Jessica turned extremely beet red and hid under the covers.
"Oops," Scott said. "Had no idea it was on." He turned red. "That is embarrassing." He looked under at Jessica. "Look at the bright side, I didn't die."
In the training area, Laura dragged Jake out of the training room headed for their bedroom.
"You're mine," she said.
Next time, the beginning of a 4-part story where Onderon finally makes his move.
Bolt (created him in 2000)
Real Name: Stuart Doyle
Background: Struck by lightning after being injected by a serum that was supposed to kill him. Instead the two worked together to speed him up.
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