|The Long Lost Sister
Author: Princess Adeline PM
Ashley finds her someone who might be her long-lost twin sister... but the problem was, she was way younger. Together they try to save the world and strengthen their bond with each other.Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Friendship - Chapters: 5 - Words: 1,248 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 12-08-12 - Published: 09-22-12 - id: 3060093
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A/N: Thanks to Archia (my first reviewer! Thanks! It means a lot to me!), anjali. roongta (I couldn't really understand your review, but thanks anyway), and Guest (said: "The first paragraph confused me but after that it was fine.")
anjali. roongta, sorry! Because fictionpress thought your name was a websitee, so I reposted and reposted until I found out what was happening. Again, SORRY!
Oh, and for the Tagalog part, don't mind it…translations are at the bottom of the page. If you use Google Translate it might not work…oh, and is anybody here a fluent Tagalog speaker? (Knows how to speak Tagalog, girl) Thanks! Now read! LOL
Last time, on The Long Lost Sister:
"I think I know where your sister is…this might sound weird but, I am your twin sister."
"What?" Janessa shrieked. "How can you be my twin? You're 12! And I'm…6!"
"See? I knew you wouldn't believe me!" I whined. "Fine. I believe you." She said sarcastically. "Don't be sarcastic…you sound just like Vanessa!" I exclaimed. "Vanessa…Janessa" I thought in my head. I started walking around my room, saying, "Ito ay hindi nangyayari ... Vanessa at si Janessa ... Sino siya? Sino sila?"
Then, Janessa interrupted me. "Tahimik na, hanapin na natin ang iyong kapatid na babae."
"Wait," I asked her. "Did you just speak Tagalog?"
"Er, what?" Janessa asked with her lips pursed and her forehead wrinkled. I just smiled and looked at her. Her expression was the same as Vanessa's when she was worried or guilty about something.
"OMG! You're my sister! I think…" I screamed. "What do you mean, you think?" she asked.
"I'm not so sure."
"Uh huh, well, maybe you came through a time portal from the future to the past." She said, a bit sarcastically.
"Oh my gosh! Janessa! You're a genius! You definitely have to come back to the present!"
"Um, this is the present." She said. I rolled my eyes. "No, I mean the future-present. And, I have to tell you something. There is an evil witch who wants to kidnap all the children with gifts to brainwash them to join his army to defeat—"
Janessa was snoring. I simply laughed and shook her awake. "And Janessa, be careful. The evil witch, Jasmine, hypnotized me into trying to kidnap you. But well she failed, because when I saw you, you reminded me of my twin sister, who was kidnapped by Jasmine, so I woke up from my trance. I really hope she got away." I said. "Okay, let's get going." She said, "To the time machine!'
"Not so fast!" I heard an eerily familiar voice say. I looked up and saw a teenage girl around 16 with long brown hair, kaleidoscope eyes (A/N: Kaleidoscope eyes? Anyone read Heroes of Olympus? Oh well, here's a hint: Piper *cough* Mclean *cough*.) , and that perfect teenage look. To be honest, she was pretty, no wait, pretty is an understatement. She was drop-dead gorgeous. It was Jasmine, our (Janessa and I) greatest enemy. "What do you want now?" I asked. "Oh, nothing. Just a little revenge on the Reese twins" she cackled. (A/N: Can teenage girls cackle? Well, I made this one cackle. She is a witch anyway!) "Reese twins?" I asked her. "Well, duh," she said. As I was standing there thinking about her statement about the 'Reese twins', Janessa was busy fighting Jasmine. I mentally slapped myself for not noticing Janessa. Her left arm, which was her and also my writing arm, was bleeding badly. Just then, Jasmine cackled loudly. She put her hands in front of her face and muttered an incantation. I noticed Janessa, with her eyes becoming like Jasmine, slowly walking towards her. Janessa was in a trance! "You too, Ashley Reese, shall come with me." She said.
She waved her hand, and everything became pitch black.
I started walking around my room, saying, "This is not happening. Vanessa and Janessa. Who is she? Who are they?"
Then, Janessa interrupted me. "That's enough, keep quiet, we'll find your sister."
A/N: CLIFFY! I think…is it? So please don't forget to review, and PM me if you have any questions.