
My prompt was "write a piece with a full plot and characters using only dialogue, onomatopoeia, and internal monologues". A boy blinded in a violent attack, his bodyguard, and the man who killed his family. When it comes down to it, how will the story end? Who will live, and who will fall?
Rated: Fiction T - English - Drama/Suspense - Words: 266 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 09-27-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3061418
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Creak.
"Xan? Xan is that you...?"
"Shh."
"Oh God. Oh God... w-who are you? Xander!"
"Now, now, Adrian." Laughter. "There's no need to scream."
Oh no, oh God no... Not him, anyone but him.
"You!"
Run. How am I supposed to run?! How the hell do I get away?!
"You didn't think I wouldn't find you, silly boy? You had to know I'd come for you eventually."
Mommy! No!
"P-please..."
"What's it like, Adrian? All alone in your dark little world?" A rustle. "Do you remember colors? Light?"
"Get-get back!"
"Do you remember my face? You put me in prison, but I, I put you in your own little version of hell."
"You killed them..."
"Yes, yes I killed them. Mommy and daddy and big sister. Have you forgotten their faces, yet? Do you remember the fire? Their screams? They begged for their lives-"
"Stop it!"
"Don't you get it, silly? I'm not going to stop. Not until I get what I want."
"...Wh-what do you want?"
"You of course. Little Adrian Haven, the last. My last." Click. "My unfinished business."
"P-please..."
"That's right, beg. Beg for your life, just like your family you snivelling little brat."
"Xander'll kill you."
"Xander, Xander, Xander. You really think I'm afraid of your muscle-bound, half-wit bodyguard?"
God.. God, I don't want to die. Not like this.
"You should consider this a mercy."
BANG.
Silence.
"Oh... oh G- oh God... X-Xan? XAN?"
Sigh. "It's okay, kiddo. It's over now."
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