
| Study in Contrast
Author: ReaverTam A snapshot of martial arts training, watching friends spar. Rather abstract. I will probably add more snapshots as they occur to me.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 279 - Updated: 10-16-12 - Published: 10-06-12 - id: 3063477
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A/N: This was an experiment, a sestina written entirely in haiku. It came out rather repetitive, but each haiku and each complete stanza should stand alone. Something of an exercise in intellectual self-gratification, I'm afraid.
dancing bluebell flames
her arms shimmer in the sun
fire in her eyes
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swift underground spring
irresistible river,
he quenches her strike
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sudden blur, his strike
his hands dance around her flames
he glows like the sun
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dynamic river
he can't be held by her eyes
brooding coiled spring
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waiting, tensed to spring
listening, feeling for a strike
(he distains his eyes)
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plunges into flames
curves away like a river
blinding as the sun
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her eyes gleam like sun
shining off a rushing spring,
azure flame-river
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earthquake in his strike
her world dissolves in gold flames
shining in her eyes
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shaded onyx eyes
soak up the warmth of the sun
return it in flames
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gushing like a spring
inevitable, his strike
divides her river
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like a smooth river
energy between their eyes,
a flow, not a strike
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blazing like the sun,
they vibrate, connected spring
burns with inner flames
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gold flames like the sun,
both close eyes, prepared to spring,
river drowns her strike
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