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Hmm.. I don't remember when I started numbering these things. Another poem from my thoughts. Criticism welcome! Please review.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 82 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 6 - Published: 10-06-12 - Status: Complete - id: 3063511
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When I fell through the glass I didn't feel the pain.
All I felt was the feeling of becoming insane.
When I fell I couldn't see anything at all.
All I saw was you waving at me standing tall.
When I fell through the glass I couldn't breathe in the water.
All I did was shout your name over and over
When I fell I realized how much I had truly loved you
To bad the end was coming without you.
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